So here is my entry for the 2nd Species Contest! I actually finished them a while ago but I wanted to finish the drawings to go along with the entry before I submitted anything. Anywho, Here they are!!!
Tennë-Jin’ Raka (Tnnë-Jin)
The
Tennë-Jin’ Raka or Tnnë Jin’ (same difference in meaning between People and Human)
shared their home planet Röq-Najaa with the Tnö-Jin. The two races may once have been the same species but as a result of ages and ages of caste system exclusion
and segregation, two genetically similar but different species evolved on their
home planet.
Firstly,
there were the Tnö Jin’. They evolved to be very flexible, with a commanding and
often times intimidating mental and physical presence. The Tnö were advanced in
science, government, combat and willpower. They were an honorable yet prideful
species.
Secondly there was the Tnnë-Jin, a
subservient slave race to the Tnö Jin’. The Tno, who were more powerful, believed that the Tnne were inferior versions
of themselves, simply “Tno’s gone wrong,” like they weren’t quite a sentient
race, and that they needed to be enslaved for their own protection.
Because the Tno were so much more powerful than the Tnne, the Tnne could never
really argue against the Tno’s superiority and the majority of the Tnne were naturally
conditioned to believe that their enslavement was necessary.
The Tnnë-Jin on the other hand,
evolved to have good hearing and sight plus smaller physical builds to notice
and flee from their slavers. An uprising
may someday have occurred if not for the genocide of the Tno, which the Tnne
refer to as “the Culling.”
Thousands of years ago, in a history
that was been lost to time, the Tnnë saw the complete eradication of their
masters. They don’t really understand what happened. Some people think it was the vengeance of an
angry deity, and others think that the Tno finally reached the pinnacle of
evolution and were changed or cut down by some cosmic force, hence why this
event is referred to as “the Culling.” Regardless of the truth, the only thing
that remains in the history books is that supposedly a giant metal dragon
descended from the sky and separated the two races, cutting down the Tnö Jin’
and completely ignoring the Tnnë-Jin. The entire event lasted a mere several
days, and then the beast left.
With the almost overnight
eradication of their masters, the surviving Tennë-Jin’Raka society was thrown
into anarchy and they almost went extinct themselves. Very few had any idea how
to use any form of technology, the few who did were so conditioned to never use
their master’s technology that they would have rather died anyway. Without the calming aura of the Tnö Jin’ the
slaves began fighting for food and power. Starvation was the leading cause of
death with fighting coming in a close second. This lasted for about two months
before a Tnnë-Jin female, who today is heralded as a hero, started reasoning
with all the remaining slaves until they all had come together, maybe not
unified but at least cooperated enough to survive as a species. A census was taken in the aftermath, and roughly
only 10% of the Tnnë-Jin population survived, barely several million. Këm-Yvan,
the hero of the Tnnë, was one of the few who actually knew how to operate Tno
tech. She taught others how to use technology and slowly the Tennë-Jin’Raka
began to prosper and eventually think for themselves.
Race Name: Tennë-Jin’Raka
Home Planet: Röq-Najaa
Languages: Alk-Nakesh, (the masters language) Alk-Nikaan
(the slaves language)
Avg. Lifespan: 130 years
Sleep Habits: 10 hours out
of every 35, (10 asleep, 25 awake)
Avg. Height: 7’6” (extreme
height variations common, i.e. between 6 to 9 feet)
Avg. Weight: 250 lbs.
Hair: No head hair but can sometimes have small thin
horns
Eyes: They have four eyes
where the iris can be any possible color (Shard lines of different colors
common)
Skin: Their skin is much
like humans but it is grayish in color, they are covered in light fur or fuzz
which can be any color (Pastel colors most common.)
Ears: They have 4 thin long pointy
ears
Arms: They have two arms
which, compared to humans, look elongated and thin.
Hands: They have no thumbs,
but 4 symmetrically placed strong and flexible fingers. No fingernails.
Feet: They have 4 flexible
big toes (which in truth are more like big fingers on their feet.) Two are
pointed forward and are more slender and can grab things, and two are pointed
backwards and are thicker and not so flexible and are used for balance.
Physical Description: Tall
and slender, (to the point of looking frail) there are no overweight Tnne
unless they are sick (Genetically incapable of creating stored energy as fat,
leading cause of death is malnutrition and starvation.)
They
have a prehensile tail (strong enough to grab and hang from but not dexterous
enough to do advanced actions, such as firing a gun) it can be used to pick up
or carry objects and it is also long enough to “hand” objects to the arms.
They
have one 6 chambered symmetrical heart that sits in the middle of the chest and
4 lungs, two normal sized and two small redundant lungs (1/4th the
size of their normal lungs).
They
have above average strength but look frail and slender because of the length of
their extremities.
Possible Average Attributes:
Strength: 13
Endurance: 11
Knowledge: 8
Reasoning: 10
Charisma: 10
Comeliness: 10
Dexterity: 13
Perception: 16
Heal: 8
Willpower start: 0 (no bonus)
Society: Their society was based, for a long time, on
just survival, creating a commonwealth, in which the people were united by a
compact of the people for the common good. This came to be known as the
Këm-Yvan Commonwealth, taking its name from the hero (Këm-Yvan) who created “the
Pact”, the writ of rules, regulations and laws that all citizens should follow to
survive and prosper. In recent times however the commonwealth is shifting to an
oligarchy, where a group of individuals claim authority based on wealth and
power. Though the Commonwealth of Këm-Yvan is still claimed to be in effect,
the wealthy and powerful have great influence over the affairs of state.
About 65% of the survivors from the
aftermath were female so they became the majority of the leaders. Genetically about
60% of newborns are female. So males are less common in everyday life. Families
are close-knit and very protective of each other; it is not uncommon to see one
household that has four or five generations present.
Military and Tech: Every member of society must serve in the
military for at least 1 year, during this time each person is taught and given
more insight on how to use old world Tno tech. After the one mandatory year
each person is given the option to remain in the military for however long they
want, the military is one of the best paid occupations. There are no police
functions as the military serves as the law keepers.
The technological advances in Tnnë
society came from two separate endeavors, one; to create or discover new things,
and two; to reverse engineer old Tnö Jin’ technology, so they are both advanced
and not advanced at the same time, for example they do not have wireless
telephones and only the military and wealthy have computers, but, by reverse
engineering old Tno tech they actually have achieved FTL travel. (In human eras
the Tnnë-Jin would be in the equivalent of the 50’s or 60’s.)
Physiologically, it is easier for
the Tnne to hold spherical objects (because of their hands), so Tnne equipment,
utensils and weapons are usually spherical or curved and almost always symmetrical.
For example the Tnne keyboard is slightly curved and there are 40 buttons
total, 20 buttons radiate outward for each hand with five for each finger
grouped at the cardinal directions. (north, south, etc.)
(Example of a Tnnë-Jin keyboard)
Fighting Styles: These fighting styles were
originally created by the Tno, but were learned and perfected by the slaves after
the Culling.
-
Tnö-Iatrii – This is their hand to hand combat. It employs flips and spins to
hit and grapple.
- Tnö-Chaell
(Ball and Chain) – They invented this form of fighting because their hands have
no thumbs and it is easiest for them to grasp spherical shaped objects. They
use a chain about 3 feet long with a metal ball on each end (a Chaellen) that
can be used for offense or defense.
-
Tnö-Aatiritee – This is what the military teaches, it is the combined use of
Iatrii and Chaell in fighting.
Star System: the name of their home system is Rään
and it is a binary sun system, having a blue giant and a white dwarf. There are
five planets in the system where their home-planet: Röq-Najaa is the third in
line and the only habitable one in the system; it has 3 moons, each which orbit
the planet at different angles and distances. The planet is 70% water where
most of the land is near the equator and tropical in climate. There are ice
islands near the poles. The Axis tilt is 2.1 degrees, being almost completely
perpendicular to its orbit plane. The surface gravity is .91, which is slightly
less than earth. There are 35 hours in a day and one year is 421 days. The home
galaxy for the Rään system is called the Qäe-Siriia Nebula, which lies relatively close to the Thanok galaxy.
The
Këm-Yvan Commonwealth has explored their own system and some surrounding areas
but they have only just begun to colonize other worlds. The KYC military is in
charge of the deep space exploration program and because of population and land
issues (current population on Roq-Najaa is 15 billion) they are very interested
in exploring and claiming new areas for themselves.
Below are two pictures of different Tnne-Jin, the first is Commander Cha-Abakk Geij who is sporting a basic military space faring uniform and wielding a classic Chaellen, and the second is Colonel Roq-Jako who is wearing the flexible yet durable Special Forces Armor, and wielding light rapid fire arm cannons on both forearms and holding a custom made SMG sidearm.
Hope you guys like them!
Xzebo out.